Lightning Never Strikes Twice

WALT use adjectives, similes (and to use other language
features) to describe a setting clearly

Lightning never strikes twice, does it?

As I said to my friend, we were frightened out of our minds as we crouched, huddling together in bottom of the windmill… As I peered out of the small window lightning blinded my eyes. I waited Boom, Bang, Crash lightning strikes shot from the bruised looking sky. I looked to my friend but all I could see was her clear blue eyes in pit black light, I could tell she was shaking in the cold breeze of the night. It was exciting now that it was over but fear took over as the windmill started to creek. The objects in the windmill started to move and we could here steps on the ground “Hello” ……. ‘Who’s there” ……. “ Come out” …….. “Were just kids” …….

Descriptive Writing

At the moment in class we have been working on descriptive writing. We have been using pictures to give us ideas of what to write about. Here is a piece of writing I did.

Here is a link to the original work.

Evacuated Hospital

It was a scorching hot day and a bush fire had started. It was spreading lightning fast.
Every worker trying to get the patiences out and safe. No one has been there since. Now here
I am driving down the rocky road to the hospital.

As I drove to into the area of the old hospital I could hear the wind whistling and the Rakau
(Trees) rustling. It looked like there had been a war it was so ruin. There was mold growing up
the walls it had just turned into a disaster. I could smell ash and burnt rakau (Wood) from the
fire. The fire was the reason why the hospital was evacuated.

I started walking in the hospital and the lights flicker. I decide to explore some more. I open a
door and got a life scaring fright from the creek of the door . I don’t want to be here anymore if
I look any further I will scarred for life. I shouldn’t have came.