1.11.16 Hi Phoebe, I like how you've described your story well. It reminded me of when I did this in Room 5. Next time you could put a title in your writing.
Kia ora Katelynn F. Its Phoebe from Karoro School. Thank you for your positive and helpful comment. I would of added more pictures I just didn't have enough space. Haere ra.
1.11.16
ReplyDeleteHi Phoebe,
I like how you've described your story well.
It reminded me of when I did this in Room 5.
Next time you could put a title in your writing.
Kia ora Katelynn F. Its Phoebe from Karoro School. Thank you for your positive and helpful comment. I would of added more pictures I just didn't have enough space. Haere ra.
ReplyDelete