1.11.16 Hi Phoebe, I like how you've described your story well. It reminded me of when I did this in Room 5. Next time you could put a title in your writing.
Kia ora Phoebe! I'm Katelynn from Grey Main School Mamaku hub! I would also put the largest crystal in the world in my box aswell! I like how you have added lots of detail into what you would put in your box. Maybe next time you could add some more images of what you would put in your box! Did you have fun completing this activity in class? Miharo! (Amazing in te reo maori!)
Kia ora Katelynn F. Its Phoebe from Karoro School. Thank you for your positive and helpful comment. I would of added more pictures I just didn't have enough space. Haere ra.
Kia ora Phoebe! I'm Katelynn from Grey Main School Mamaku hub! I would also put the largest crystal in the world in my box aswell! I like how you have added lots of detail into what you would put in your box. Maybe next time you could add some more images of what you would put in your box! Did you have fun completing this activity in class? Miharo! (Amazing in te reo maori!)
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ReplyDeleteHi Phoebe,
I like how you've described your story well.
It reminded me of when I did this in Room 5.
Next time you could put a title in your writing.
Kia ora Phoebe! I'm Katelynn from Grey Main School Mamaku hub! I would also put the largest crystal in the world in my box aswell! I like how you have added lots of detail into what you would put in your box. Maybe next time you could add some more images of what you would put in your box! Did you have fun completing this activity in class? Miharo! (Amazing in te reo maori!)
ReplyDeleteKia ora Katelynn F. Its Phoebe from Karoro School. Thank you for your positive and helpful comment. I would of added more pictures I just didn't have enough space. Haere ra.
DeleteKia ora Phoebe! I'm Katelynn from Grey Main School Mamaku hub! I would also put the largest crystal in the world in my box aswell! I like how you have added lots of detail into what you would put in your box. Maybe next time you could add some more images of what you would put in your box! Did you have fun completing this activity in class? Miharo! (Amazing in te reo maori!)
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