Tuesday 14 March 2017

My Sea Week Writing

For sea week we wrote about why the ocean is important. Here is my writing work. Please leave a kind, positive and thoughtful comment. 

4 comments:

  1. Hi Phoebe it's Billie here. I like how you used interesting words like polluting. I also Think that you use hamburger paragraphs very well. I think that you need a little more information Bye for now From your class buddy Billie.

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  2. Hi Billie its Phoebe here. Thank you for the kind, positive and helpful comment. Ka kete. Bye.

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  3. Awesome layout Miss Pheobe!! Loving the use of background colour with your chosen text colour too - I can read it clearly! Cyb x

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  4. Hi Cyb, Its Phoebe here. Thank you for kind, positive and helpful comment. Ka kite. bye.

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