Descriptive Writing

At the moment in class we have been working on descriptive writing. We have been using pictures to give us ideas of what to write about. Here is a piece of writing I did.

Here is a link to the original work.

Evacuated Hospital

It was a scorching hot day and a bush fire had started. It was spreading lightning fast.
Every worker trying to get the patiences out and safe. No one has been there since. Now here
I am driving down the rocky road to the hospital.

As I drove to into the area of the old hospital I could hear the wind whistling and the Rakau
(Trees) rustling. It looked like there had been a war it was so ruin. There was mold growing up
the walls it had just turned into a disaster. I could smell ash and burnt rakau (Wood) from the
fire. The fire was the reason why the hospital was evacuated.

I started walking in the hospital and the lights flicker. I decide to explore some more. I open a
door and got a life scaring fright from the creek of the door . I don’t want to be here anymore if
I look any further I will scarred for life. I shouldn’t have came.