Best Part Of Me

Best Part Of Me

Learning Intentions

I am learning to use language features to make my writing interesting and engaging for the reader.

I am learning to think carefully about the words I use so that my writing is descriptive and engaging for the reader.

I am learning to add an appropriate visual to my work

I will be successful when I can show….

-I have used some language features to make my writing interesting and engaging (smile, metaphor, alliteration, onomatopoeia, rhyme)

-I have carefully chosen some interesting words to include in my writing

-I have some descriptive words in my writing (adjectives)

-I have added a photo to my writing

My Brain

The  best part of me is my brain. My Brain Controls my whole body, it controls my whīra (feelings) too. It tells my manawa (Heart) to pump karukaru (Blood). My Brain is like a machine it is the one thing that keeps my body alive. It is hard to be a brain because it has to think of all the reason and answers for work. It's also hard because while doing sport and learning it is keeping my body ora (alive). That is why my brain is the best part of me.