Persuasive Writing Why We Should Have Pets

We have been having a go at writing a piece of persuasive writing. Here is my writing about why we should or shouldn't have pets.

Title A Short Statement about the topic. eg. ‘Rugby League Is A Great Sport’	I Stand Up For Pets
Overview/ Statement of position A brief statement of your view about the topic.  What you believe or want to argue.	I strongly believe that people should have pets. Pets are good for guiding people with a disability like if they are blind or deaf. Pets are also good for comfort because they can keep you company if you are old or alone. Pets can be trained to do certain jobs like jobs at home or a rescue dog. Pets can detect if someone  has cancer or if they are going to have a fit.
Series of Arguments Reasons Your points supporting your view about the topic.  Your arguments to support your statement and information to support these arguments. Remember -argument -supporting detail, reasons, examples	Firstly, Pets are good for guiding people with a disability like if they are blind or deaf. They guide them everywhere and they go and help them open and shut things. Guide dogs aren’t just good for guiding people with disability they also protect them.
	Secondly, Pets are also good for comfort because they  can keep you company if you are old or alone. If you are old you don’t have anyone to keep you company because their kids have moved out. Animals are good to talk to because they don’t answer back.
	Thirdly, Pets can be trained to do certain jobs like jobs at home or a rescue dog. Pets can be trained to be a police dog to sniff out bad guys and to sniff out drugs. Dogs can be a police dog, fire dog, rescue dog. Dogs can also be trained to do jobs around the house. Jobs like getting the morning paper, fetch specific things for you.
	Finally, Pets can detect if someone  has cancer or if they are going to have a fit. Dogs can detect if you have a disease like cancer. When Dogs smell cancer in a person they normally keep sniffing for a while and then sit by them. Dogs can also detect when you are going to have a fit if you trick them they are smart and don’t fall for it.
Concluding statement Summing it up.  A summary of your arguments and your view on the topic.	In Conclusion I strongly believe that people should have pets because pets are good for guiding people, to keep you company if you’re old or alone, pets can be trained to do specific jobs, and also pets can detect if someone has cancer. For these reasons I strongly believe people should have pets.