I am really pleased to see your science work up on your blog. You have shown me that you understand the water cycle and that you have learnt the meaning of some great science words. You did a great job at writing all this up and explaining it in your video. You spoke clearly and showed you had a lot of great knowledge. An area you could have improved was the work you did around 'Human Impacts.' There was a lot more information you could have put here.
I also really liked listening to your video with Caleb and Daniel where you read out, 'An Interview with A Glass of Water.' I could hear that you were really focused on your reading. It is a shame that another classroom was in the tech. centre at the same time as this made it hard to hear you. Next time move to a quieter place.
It was good to see that you could also explain the states of matter.
Thanks for sharing your work. Ka pai tō mahi pūtaiao!
Hey Phoebe, I really like reading both of your work. Maybe next time you can get some better pictures, I mean the pictures you have are good but maybe get some better pictures.
Kia ora Phoebe
ReplyDeleteI am really pleased to see your science work up on your blog. You have shown me that you understand the water cycle and that you have learnt the meaning of some great science words. You did a great job at writing all this up and explaining it in your video. You spoke clearly and showed you had a lot of great knowledge. An area you could have improved was the work you did around 'Human Impacts.' There was a lot more information you could have put here.
I also really liked listening to your video with Caleb and Daniel where you read out, 'An Interview with A Glass of Water.' I could hear that you were really focused on your reading. It is a shame that another classroom was in the tech. centre at the same time as this made it hard to hear you. Next time move to a quieter place.
It was good to see that you could also explain the states of matter.
Thanks for sharing your work. Ka pai tō mahi pūtaiao!
Hey Phoebe, I really like reading both of your work. Maybe next time you can get some better pictures, I mean the pictures you have are good but maybe get some better pictures.
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